lunes, 27 de mayo de 2013

Advantages of a 21 year old man

I am a man with 21 years

Today in Chile to be a man is an advantage in many ways, but also has its disadvantages.

In our society to be a man has many benefits, as for a long time different elements have been built men in mind, Chilean society being a 'sexist society " for example architecture, transportation, sports and culture, are thought for man.

I have 21 years and I feel very advantaged by to be a man within Chilean society, but I think it is a responsibility to women, so they can have the same opportunities as us men.

To my age, there are many advantages to be man and I'm at the limit between being young and being an adult, as give us adult responsibilities without being adults, unlike many women. For example in youth work, the man makes more money than women.

Another advantage is that women my age do not have the freedom that men have at my age, being more independent and taking more responsibilities.

One disadvantage of being a man of my age is that we are displaced, and we think we can bear more than women, adults and children, being assigned to work hard, to wait, to stand on the subway, etc..

So I think that Chilean society must step in terms of equal opportunities and social responsibilities without neglecting the qualities of each genre.
If you are a man you have to consider that in our society have many advantages, but also have a great responsibility, because it is a task for all that society can understand that we all have the same opportunities, creating a more inclusive society.

If you are a woman you must understand that today the world is evolving in terms of the integration of women in many ways, but they should know that sexism in society is the fault of everyone, and you women have a big task to overcome this and be integrated to the places that were displaced.

1 comentario:

  1. Bruno,
    Word Count: 335. A bit too many.

    I think you have written an excellent piece of writing, congrats!

    Please, pay attention to the following OBS.,

    I am a man with 21 years (I am a 21-year-old-man)

    Today in Chile (to be) a man is an advantage in many ways, but also IT has its disadvantages.

    In our society (to be) a man has many benefits…

    …sports and culture, are thought for mEn.

    I (have) 21 years OLD and …

    … For example in youth work, (the man makes) more money than women.

    … in our society (YOU) have many advantages…

    Cheers,

    JC

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